Friday, April 24, 2009

disconnection

This disconnection
is a cobweb on our fingers.
You don't know me
(not really, no)
one bit.

Words.
Not just between us,
but between you.

How?
how?

There is love, and
here are walls.
Here, there,
there, here;
but more latter than former.
Spotlight jumps
flickering gray
like the static
of my favorite radio station.

It's never too late,
except
for
us.


_____
copyright Miss Erin McIntosh, 2009
please do not reprint without permission
Poetry Friday roundup at Under the Covers

6 comments:

holly cupala said...

Wow. I'm blown away by your poem, Erin. Your flow of words is just stunning.

Maya Ganesan said...

WOW.

Cuileann said...

I like this voice.

tanita davis said...

The sense imagery of cobwebs on my fingers -- a sticky thing that should connect -- or once did connect, but is now mere annoyance -- whoa.

Colorado Writer said...

Love this.

Idiosyncra said...

Seems unclear to me. I'm hesitant to say I like anything about it because I'm not sure what it's really about. But, that's my own personal bias! I tend to like things a bit more clear. It's definitely got potential.