I was the modern-day Alice in Wonderland.
Not the 21st century Cinderella, like my mother
wanted me to be.
I drank what wasn't mine until I grew
into a big girl, who had instead of independence
a hole
that she fell into
and got stuck in large places
talking to all the mythical, glamorous creatures
that wander about in dark corners.
The only place of solace was the garden,
with its tall walls and its roses of
blood red and cotton white
Until the woman came and took me to court
and off with my head was all that was left to be heard.
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copyright Miss Erin McIntosh, 2009
please do not reprint without permission
Poetry Friday roundup at Carol's Corner
Friday, June 19, 2009
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16 comments:
I love it! I think this may be one of your best ones yet.
I think this is the best poem of yours that I've read.
Dude.
(That's all I can say.)
I LOVE THIS. You've got talent, Miss Erin! :)
Dark. Dark in the same way I think of Alice In Wonderland. Thanks for the read.
Miss Erin! I agree with Christian L.
I love where you took the allusions, and your phrasing reads so well.
I love this poem! (:
Very nice! Love your banner. :)
Wow. This one is thought-provoking! Well done.
Love it. Love it. You probably could have guess that.
Love it! It seems like it's just full of meaning, and it's a bit dark, too. To me those are the best poems.
O_O Wowza. So...eerie. And amazing. I'm not sure what else to say.
you.wrote.that?
i agree with sarah.. DUDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
:D you are freakin awesome, can i have your autograph?????? :D :D :D
I really like this one.
I *LIKE* that. A lot.
Erin I love you :)
That was really amazing.
* nods *
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